Shiqinglboston
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Football in China
edithttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Football_in_China
More detailed information is needed in Professional League section including top teams and their achievements, and recent famous players trade. A new section Women National is needed In National Team section, main achievements and titles could be helpful. "Foreign Leagues" title could be changed to "Famous Players" and the content need rearrangement.
Wiki Topics and sources Oct 31 update
editFirst Choice
boston harbor
http://www.bostonharborislands.org/ http://www.bostonharbornow.org/ https://www.nps.gov/boha/index.htm https://www.mass.gov/locations/boston-harbor-islands
Add a new section "Receation", including the events and outdoor activities in Boston Harbor Islands, wildlife information, transportaion, HarborWalk in mainland, and others. Sources are from above government and .org website.
Second Choice
new england autumn
https://www.boston.com/culture/travel/2017/09/29/6-new-england-towns-to-visit-in-october https://eds.a.ebscohost.com/eds/detail/detail?vid=0&sid=e791c127-8151-46cf-855f-aa3340df0f9e%40sessionmgr4006&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=20133166338&db=lah http://www.discovernewengland.org/season/new-england-fall
In nature change section, add information about how foliage change during the autumn, based on the 2nd source above. In popular culture section, add traditional events and popular places from the first link above, and other outdoor activities information like foliage watch, and information about different states in New England, from 3rd link above.
Shiqinglboston (talk) 00:14, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Shiqinglboston (talk) 00:05, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Shiqinglboston (talk) 03:21, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Unfortunately such pages already exist...
edithttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boston_Harbor_Islands_National_Recreation_Area
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boston_Harborwalk
You could of course add a recreation section, but it would be short, with one-sentence descriptions of these things and links to these other pages. \
I think your additions to "Autumn in New England" sound useful. However, you should also search for articles about the individual aspects you want to add to make sure such pages do not already exist...