Sewaneegender

September 2012

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Raising Cain: Protecting the Emotional Life of Boys (October 29)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! DPRoberts534 (talk) 05:24, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Hello! Sewaneegender, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!

Dan Kindlon

Please don't create this article again. It is currently located at WT:Articles for creation/Dan Kindlon. —Largo Plazo (talk) 12:34, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Tropes vs. Women in Video Games

Your recent additions to this article have been removed as they contained material attributed to sources that aren't considered reliable. Wikipedia has strict rules about sourcing, especially when living persons are involved. Forum posts, YouTube videos, personal blogs, and other self-published sources are almost never considered reliable. If you have further questions you can start a discussion on the article's talk page. Thanks,--Cúchullain ^t/c 19:35, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dan Kindlon (October 31)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rankersbo (talk) 12:36, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

November 2013

Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to introduce inappropriate pages to Wikipedia, as you did at Dan Kindlon, you may be blocked from editing. If you need guidance on how to create appropriate pages, try using the Article Wizard. —Largo Plazo (talk) 21:23, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Welcome!

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Dan Kindlon (November 3)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Sionk (talk) 23:34, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Please stop removing speedy deletion notices from pages that you have created yourself, as you did with Dan Kindlon. If you continue, you may be blocked from editing. Also, please see the final disposition of this article at WT:Articles for creation/Dan Kindlon. —Largo Plazo (talk) 23:45, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

I have a thought: If this is for school, why don't you ask your teacher for help? —Largo Plazo (talk) 23:46, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

This is your last warning. The next time you remove a speedy deletion notice from a page you have created yourself, as you did at Dan Kindlon, you may be blocked from editing without further notice. Sionk (talk) 19:27, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

This was your fault

I just looked at the references for the first time. You show all but one of them as being by Dan Kindlon, and when I told you this was a problem, you never responded to it. Well, you wrote them wrong (all but one; one of them is by Kindlon himself). You have his name where the name of the author of each of the article's about him is supposed to be, so you made it look like he wrote all of them. —Largo Plazo (talk) 03:19, 4 November 2013 (UTC)

So what should I do?? Sewaneegender (talk) 03:35, 4 November 2013 (UTC)

You still haven't fixed the references. Is the teacher grading you on the quality of the work? ;-P —Largo Plazo (talk) 15:19, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

The correct way forward is to firstly work on the article draft (above) at Articles for Creation. The message at the top of the article tells you what you need to do. In particular remember Wikipedia's 'golden rule'. If Kindlon is an academic, you could also look at the alternative notability guidelines for academics. When you have found independent sources which prove Kindlon is important and/or well known, you're welcome to re-submit the draft to Articles for Creation where another reviewer will take a look at it. Sionk (talk) 19:56, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Sewaneegender, I've deleted the article from the article space pending approval from the Articles for Creation submission. It appears that the main holdup is the references - references need to be third-party reliable, published sources, and they need to be formatted correctly so it doesn't look like they're all written by Dan Kindlon. If you're having trouble with the citation templates, don't use them, and just ask for help if you need it.--Cúchullain ^t/c 20:22, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Raising Cain: Protecting the Emotional Life of Boys (November 17)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Shii (tock) 15:34, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Raising Cain: Protecting the Emotional Life of Boys

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Rankersbo (talk) 12:07, 31 August 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Daniel J. Kindlon

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. TKK! bark with me! 22:33, 19 December 2014 (UTC)