Rnklupptaylor
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Thank you for adding to Jesu meine Freude, but I see three problems:
- We need sources for the facts, not only one for one cantata.
- There is way too much detail. Perhaps place some of it on the composer's page, where details about his style are better suited. Or write a few cantata articles.
- An exclamation mark is no encyclopedic style.
Please fix it yourself, or it will be reverted. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:20, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for adding references, - next wish: please format them like the others in the article. Just the url is not acceptable. The sound files create too much white space. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:46, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
Friendly notice edit
- It is usually discouraged to link to your own website (or even worse, your own google documents...). This is in addition to the other concerns of WP:SPS.
- It is usually better to avoid basing sections on mostly primary sources. This is to avoid WP:OR, and to allow non-expert readers to verify the information (not everybody can read 18th-century music manuscripts and recognise the presence of a chorale melody [let alone its text, which is usually in nigh undecipherable cursive]). Cheers, RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 22:42, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
- BTW, the kind of sources one should seek here would be those listed in places like here. Cheers, RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 22:51, 27 November 2021 (UTC)