User talk:Rich9799/Scotch & Soda (clothing)
Hi! Your article looks great, I like that you chose an article that didn't have anything on it before. You did a great job adding relevant information to the page. Only suggestion is to add some more recent articles as citations. Aliwall (talk) 18:44, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
Pre-move Review
editHello Rich9799, I looked over your article history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!
Before going live, please address address these items:
- Add citations throughout to reference your new content.
- Make sure that the text sounds like it belongs in an encyclopedia. The phrase "the perfect mix of simplicity and intensity" does not seem to follow the neutral point of view standard.
I've written a series of suggestions that most of the class' articles have room to improve upon. They may not all apply to your article and don't worry if they aren't all done, but these features can really make your additions shine.
When ready, you can Begin moving your work to Wikipedia! A detailed explanation of the process can be found on our class wiki.
Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 06:40, 14 February 2020 (UTC)