Thank you for your comments. A couple of questions: (1) are you rejecting my article, (2) I have some websites in the citations, but most citations are to older newspapers cites that have been painfully researched, (3) tone? Not sure what you mean by neutral. What part of the article strikes you as non-neutral? Thanks!

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thanks for the advice, friend! CTFFMoe (talk) 03:34, 19 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

RGratus3, you are invited to the Teahouse!

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Thank you, Hiking in Israel was my first article and I truly appreciate your guidance! I will correct the sources soon. Thank you so much!

Tybie (talk) 21:05, 19 May 2015 (UTC)Reply