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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gloria Benedikt (May 11)

Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please note we don't use external links in the body of an article they might be suitable for conversion into references though

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:20, 11 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, MerlijnTurn18! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 15:20, 11 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gloria Benedikt (September 14)

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CASSIOPEIA was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

1. Please remove all external links from the body texts

2. Wikipedia can NOT be the source 3. Please note subject need to pass the notability requirements for WP:ENTERTAINER of Wikipedia. 4. Sources provided need to be independent, reliable to demonstrate the notability of the subject.

5. Please read WP:Your First Article and Referring for Beginners to familiar yourself on how to write an article and cite source in Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 09:50, 14 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

05:47:30, 14 September 2018 review of draft by MerlijnTurn18

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, MerlijnTurn18! I'm CASSIOPEIA. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 09:52, 14 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

Re: Draft:Gloria_Benedikt

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello MerlijnTurn18 I have added projects Austria, Biographies, to your article. You may wish to join them, check their to-do, and meet new people with interest in these topics. Cheers, --Gryllida (talk) 00:58, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gloria Benedikt (December 7)

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Writing that a subject "works at the intersection of art and science" in the lede sentence may be true, but reads like marketing buzzspeak. This draft appears written to promote its subject rather than to describe her neutrally.

See WP:Markup for how to mark section headings. Section headings are delimited by equal signs (=), which are used to construct the table of contents of a page.

Fix reference errors.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Gloria Benedikt, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 07:51, 7 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Gloria Benedikt

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, MerlijnTurn18. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Gloria Benedikt".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Snowycats (talk) 14:22, 9 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

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