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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 1) edit

 
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Mario Pimenta M Cedric Pimenta (talk) 10:14, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

April 2024 edit

 

Hello M Cedric Pimenta. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

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I am not getting,I am just trying to write best article and making necessary changes M Cedric Pimenta (talk) 10:44, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
i am not getting paid M Cedric Pimenta (talk) 10:44, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Your draft says "Media Coordinator: Mario Pimenta" – do they not pay you for your efforts? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:32, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
It's just a position in college.
I saw a article about Waves,a bits Goa cultural festival so I decided to replicate it for myself.Even the position is left less than a week,before I lose it.I want to show to make it.I am trying my best to make it neutral,I citied local news for authentic information also M Cedric Pimenta (talk) 13:48, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
also can you point out what makes it sound advertise,the event has already over.
Also which references don't work
All of them are genuine local digital news websites M Cedric Pimenta (talk) 14:09, 2 April 2024 (UTC)Reply