Lobsterdiego

In response to your feedback

Hi Lobsterdiego,

Thanks for the feedback. Your article looks good, but there are two things you can improve before getting it reviewed:

• Put the references after the next punctuation mark (periods preferably, commas if appropriate).
• Provide more info with your references, not just a bare link. People won't know what the reference entails! How to do this? Check this:

Referencing may look daunting, but it's easy enough to do. Here's a guide to getting started. References are important to validate your writing and inform the reader. Any editor can remove unreferenced material, and unsubstantiated articles may end up getting deleted, so when you add something to an article, it's advisable to also include a reference to say from where it came. If you need any assistance, let me know.

If you are done, leave a message on my Talk page and I'll review the page again. If it passes, I'll publish it for you. Regards,

Pim Rijkee (talk) 12:11, 25 April 2012 (UTC)

 

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Sarah (talk) 02:22, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

Hello! Lobsterdiego, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you'd like to drop by the Teahouse and discuss the article, the experienced hosts at the Teahouse would be glad to see if they can offer improvement suggestions... and that may lead to the article becoming accepted. Please join us! Sarah (talk) 02:22, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Fitzroy Morrissey concern

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Your article submission Fitzroy Morrissey

Hello Lobsterdiego. It has been over six months since you last edited your article submission, entitled Fitzroy Morrissey.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 23:00, 19 November 2013 (UTC)