Kubuflubu

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Peter Andersohn (September 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ibjaja055 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ibjaja055 (talk) 08:53, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Dear Ibjaja055,

thank you for your reply. I hope you can help a little with the issues mentioned so i can may meat the requirements for that article.

There are already some sources of independent instances:

- Article in the Newspaper of Leipzig: https://www.lvz.de/lokales/leipzig-lk/borna/groitzsch-grimms-maerchen-als-schattentheater-der-bibliothek-aufgefuehrt-YCKUXQWGUI6QFEF24AZLHGYVRA.html

- Published Book of the subject: https://www.hugendubel.de/de/buch_kartoniert/peter_andersohn_richard_prussas-ursachen_sozialer_ungleichheiten_der_bildungschancen_im_deutschen_bildungssystem_im_vergleich_mit_dem_finnischen_modell-9849201-produkt-details.html

- listed as member of the saxony state stage: https://www.landesbuehnen-sachsen.de/mitarbeiterinnen/

- listed by publisher: https://www.kicktheflame.de/

- original award verdict of Kurt Weill Fest: https://www.science-music.de/kurt-weill-fest-preis

- picture proof of the subject on band page: https://www.saeldessanc.com/ - the subject was not founder of the band, so i would see that as independent source

- IMDB Link: https://www.imdb.com/name/nm9433557/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_0_nm_8_in_0_q_peter%2520andersohn

May i get these sources wrong, and may you can help what me with some information what makes them unvalid or non independent. Some of them have the requirement of not beeing only passing mentions, such as the newspaper article, where the subject's work is credited, or the book publication, which shows that the subject has contributed relevant material to the public of germany.

Also, the co works with german musicians and filmmakers are mentioned, which have at least relevance throughout the german art landscape and are also independent on the subject. And for the sake of the capturing of the german artist information on wikipedia, additional pages of the mentioned co workers (Ernst Horn, Saeldes Sanc, Movie "Black Nazi" etc.) should be made too after this one is finished.

Regarding the biographical facts, i'll trie to find another source than the CV, for i see that this source is not reliable due to the authorship of the subject himself.

I hope you can help me with improving this article to meet the standards.

Best regards Kubuflubu (talk) 13:15, 2 September 2024 (UTC)