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I've updated the "Career" section of the "Silver Sun" page. Specifically, I've added to what was the final paragraph, and also created a new final paragraph. Both of these changes are updates on lead singer/songwriter James Broad's career.

The YouTube video for "The Pain Don't Come So Easy," which is now mentioned in the second to last paragraph is here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Up9kkgCBAKw

While James Broad's name doesn't appear on the post, other Silver Sun videos have been posted under the same username, "lordmelbury," which he also uses on his Facebook page:

https://www.facebook.com/lordmelbury

The video for the Steely Dan cover, "Barrytown," which is now mentioned in the final paragraph is here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZMOIN5k1kck

Nothing in the post mentions Silver Sun or James Broad, but Broad's LinkedIn profile lists him as owner of Old Skool Hooligans:

http://www.linkedin.com/pub/james-broad/1b/538/6ab

From the description on the page, "A version of the classic Steely Dan song which we have covered for your delectation and also to promote our range of great T shirts..." it seems clear to me that he is the performer of the song, and as it's in the Silver Sun style, I thought it belonged on the page.

I really had no idea how to cite these things, since some detective work was needed to draw the conclusions I drew. If it needs to be done, and CAN be done, please let me know how, and I will fix it immediately. As a Silver Sun fan, I believe that other fans would like to know about these more recent developments, and they aren't clearly documented anywhere else on the web, that I am aware of.

Thank you!

Kishinthunder (talk) 02:39, 23 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

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