Kimdavis621

Major formatting issues at Draft:Steven Oberman

Hello, it took me several minutes to clean up the formatting errors to the point that the draft was even legible.

Take a look at a few of the areas I cleaned up, then the areas I didn't. Note how indenting a paragraph causes the text to display wrong, so do not indent. Also I find-replaced every use of "Mr.", since we don't do that here. Also you were putting {{reflist}} after every single footnote; that's not how it works, that code should only appears once at the bottom of the page, which tells the program to list all the above footnotes there. You also need to make proper section headings rather than bolding your subtitles.

Long/short, please take a look at how other articles are formatted and do likewise. Look at the page after each time you save it, and if there are things that blatantly look to be coded wrong, please fix them.

These format issues are separate from any WP:Notability or WP:Sourcing issues, which a next reviewer will address. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:44, 6 July 2014 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Steven Oberman

Hello, Kimdavis621. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Steven Oberman".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 11:07, 4 May 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Steven Oberman concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Steven Oberman, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:37, 28 November 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Steven Oberman

Hello, Kimdavis621. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Steven Oberman".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 15:23, 28 November 2015 (UTC)