Jeremy Parker Foster

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:01, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

• Comment: Error: There was no comment detected! Please follow the instructions at Template:AfC comment. Several issues:
• The article has no context at all; "Patriarchs" of what faith/group? It should have a very clear WP:Lead
• The article has no sourcing: there have to be footnotes for each fact stated that let the reader know where s/he can verify this information in a published work
• The tone is conversational, with phrases like "Not much is known, as I'm not a historian". That's not how an article is written. MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:01, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Before you go further too, let's make sure this issue is not already partially addressed in an existing article that you can maybe expand upon. Can you clarify exactly what organisation it is you're writing about? Patriarchs of what???

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/A brief biography of the Patriarchs

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 14:00, 2 February 2014 (UTC)