Itsablaupunkt

Your submission at Articles for creation: Per Capita Australia (March 19)

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The Herald (Benison) (talk) 07:17, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

Could you please explain how it "reads an essay" or not in a "neutral point of view" so I can adjust the submission? Itsablaupunkt (talk) 12:01, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

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• Have a look at other articles to see how an article is structured. Go through thr links provided to understand the Manual of style and how to fix the errors in the article. Thanks. The Herald (Benison) (talk) 12:07, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

  Thanks for the links! I had a good look at them but I am still a bit confused. I modeled the submission on this page here as they are similar organisations https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Australia_Institute#cite_note-30

  Are the two submission not similar?

  I'll change the style for the names of the publications to better suit the Wikipedia style guide. Itsablaupunkt (talk) 12:31, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

Yeah, you can use that as a template. The Herald (Benison) (talk) 12:35, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

Great! It's what I used when I started putting this page together.

I'll make some further adjustments then.

Thanks Itsablaupunkt (talk) 13:08, 19 March 2024 (UTC)