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editHi, once you put content on an article page, it will be judged as it is. Some comments on the draft
- Book and journal refs need page numbers
- It is considered one of Murnane's greatest and most ambitious works— A couple of refs doesn't make it incontrovertible fact, and it has a promotional tone. I'd rephrase something like It has been described as one of Murnane's most important works works
- If you can add any facts, such as sales or awards, that would be good
- If there were negative or neutral reviews, (I'll look if I get the chance), you should include them for balance
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Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:47, 22 January 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for the COI response. For single references, just put the page number or range, eg [1] or [2] For multiple refs to the same book, personally I put [3] etc as the ref and then have the book in a new "Cited texts" section, below. For multiple refs to the same source, give it a name as I've done with the first example.[1]
References
edit- ^ a b Taylor, Barry; van Perlo, Ber (1998). Rails. Robertsbridge, East Sussex: Pica / Christopher Helm. p. 37. ISBN 1-873403-59-3.
- ^ Taylor, Barry; van Perlo, Ber (1998). Rails. Robertsbridge, East Sussex: Pica / Christopher Helm. pp. 7–12. ISBN 1-873403-59-3..
- ^ Taylor & van Perlo p. 37
Cited texts
edit- Taylor, Barry; van Perlo, Ber (1998). Rails. Robertsbridge, East Sussex: Pica / Christopher Helm. ISBN 1-873403-59-3.
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