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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs to

meet any of the eight academic-specific criteria
or cite multiple reliable, secondary sources independent of the subject, which cover the subject in some depth

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:52, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Emmanue!EH2! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:52, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. I will do that. Emmanue!EH2 (talk) 15:46, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Please help me with...my first draft of article in my sandbox Claude Mariottini bio in draft sandbox was rejected. I do not understand what I need to do. Emmanue!EH2 (talk) 14:51, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Take it up with the reviewer, DoubleGrazing.--Bbb23 (talk) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks @Bbb23.

Hi Emmanue!EH2,

Just to clarify, your draft wasn't rejected (which would mean it cannot be resubmitted), only declined (which means it can be, once you've addressed the reasons for the decline).

These reasons are:

The draft is completely unreferenced. Articles on living people have particularly strict referencing requirements. Every material statement, anything potentially contentious, and all private personal details must be clearly supported by inline citations to reliable published sources. So when you say "Mariottini was born in Brazil. He came to the USA in 1963." – where did you get that information from? "He is a graduate of California Baptist University, Riverside, California (B. A., 1968)" – which source backs this up? Etc.
There is also no evidence that the subject is notable, which is a core requirement for inclusion in Wikipedia. You can show notability by either the general WP:GNG guideline, which requires significant coverage in multiple secondary sources that are reliable and independent; or by the special academic one WP:NACADEMIC which has eight different criteria, one of which has to be met, and you need to provide evidence of this.

You can find advice on article creation at WP:YFA, and on referencing at WP:REFB.

If you still have questions, you can come by the AfC help desk WP:AFCHD and ask there, either myself or another reviewer will be happy to help.

Best, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:14, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you. Thanks for your patience. Its my first time and I am trying to understand all these details. I will work on this and check the links you provided and then resubmit. If I am still having trouble I will follow protocol and connect with you again for further assistance. Many thanks. Emmanue!EH2 (talk) 15:48, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi again. I have talked with the Dr Claude Mariottini and asked him for further documentation and links as you require. The documentation of being born in Brazil and coming to US in 1963 is from the person directly and stated clearly in his blog bio which I documented and linked. Is that still not acceptable? His published books on Amazon are linked to Amazon. Is that not sufficient? The other publications of articles, etc., seem to be older and the links are buried in secondary sources so my guess is that is not acceptable. Also you say he is not notable. So his creditials and resume are old since he is retired. So how do I document those? I am trying to help Professor Mariottini, so do I just tell him we dont have enough documentation and he is not notable so he cant be listed? Not sure what my next step is. Please advise. Thanks so much.. Emmanue!EH2 (talk) 17:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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