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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Mrmatiko (talk) 20:11, 14 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

There are several key things that concern me/that you can do:

  1. The article relies too heavily on extremely positive quotes
  2. "She continued to grow as a dancer" isn't really very neutral or encyclopedic
  3. ditto "graced the cover", "extremely versatile" and "DDS also conducted an exclusive interview"

I would also suggest removing the empty <ref></ref> tags from the top of the article --Mrmatiko (talk) 20:27, 14 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Bmusician 06:59, 15 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

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Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:00, 5 March 2012 (UTC)Reply