Bihlj

Your submission at Articles for creation: Association of Occupational Health Professionals in Healthcare (AOHP) (January 9)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Association of Occupational Health Professionals in Healthcare (AOHP) (June 23)

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Bingobro (Chat) 16:17, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

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Draft:Association of Occupational Health Professionals in Healthcare (AOHP)

Hi Bihlj, I worked a bit on your sources and formatting to make the article look nicer. Primarily as WP training for me. As I noticed, you cite quite reliable sources (government or established non-profit organizations from the health care sector). But do any of them mention the article's subject, AOHP? If not, you will have a problem with wp:notability. Is the organisation non-profit or not? What does it do? News reports about past events where they were involved, perhaps?

What has the section eleborating generally about Healthcare Workplace Hazards to do with AOHP? You need to establish a connection or leave it out. Good luck 2.247.243.245 (talk) 10:32, 8 October 2018 (UTC)