Arronlharrison
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:47, 9 October 2012 (UTC)- Comment: Error: There was no comment detected! Please follow the instructions at Template:AfC comment. Greetings, your article was suitable for publication, but needs a lot of work. I would strongly encourage you to drop into the Teahouse to get some advice from volunteer mentors to address the issues noted in the tags at the top. Please do not remove the tags until the issues are fixed, as these serve as "construction signs" letting folks know the article is still being improved.
- Note I had to do a lot of rearranging to get a clear timeline, remove subjective (opinion) material, etc. The article has references mentioned, but not linked and with no WP:Footnotes to show which reference proves which fact. I suggest you read Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and see if you can continue to improve those references. Hope this helps, looking forward to seeing the article develop! MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:15, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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