- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 01:22, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
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Yun Hai
- ... that Taiwanese President Tsai Ing-wen visited New York store Yun Hai during her March 2023 stopover in the United States? Source: [1]
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Created by Butterdiplomat (talk). Self-nominated at 21:48, 28 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Yun Hai; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- ALT1 ... that New York store Yun Hai launched a Kickstarter campaign to help counteract the 2021 Chinese ban on Taiwanese pineapples and raised more than 8 times the expected proceeds? Source: [2] Butterdiplomat (talk) 13:43, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
Article was new enough, long enough, no copyvio, no significant style issues, sourcing is good, seems to be first nomination so no QPQ needed. Only one thing—I like ALT1 better, it seems more interesting. I think it can be made more concise and punchier however, how about this instead: "that New York store Yun Hai raised eight times their fundraising target for a Kickstarter campaign to counteract the 2021 Chinese ban on Taiwanese pineapples?" Let me know your thoughts. toobigtokale (talk) 01:05, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think that is good but suggest further adjusting to say "... that New York store Yun Hai raised eight times its fundraising target for a Kickstarter campaign to support farmers in Taiwan amid the 2021 Chinese ban on Taiwanese pineapples?" Think this wording is more accurate. Butterdiplomat (talk) 03:21, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- Ah ok that clears up a bit of confusion for me. However it is pretty long. "... that New York store Yun Hai raised eight times its fundraising target to support Taiwanese farmers after China banned the import of Taiwanese pineapples?" How about this? toobigtokale (talk) 06:12, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think that is good but suggest further adjusting to say "... that New York store Yun Hai raised eight times its fundraising target for a Kickstarter campaign to support farmers in Taiwan amid the 2021 Chinese ban on Taiwanese pineapples?" Think this wording is more accurate. Butterdiplomat (talk) 03:21, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- That is good for me. Thanks! Butterdiplomat (talk) 12:16, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
Approved with my revised ALT1 above. toobigtokale (talk) 14:55, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Butterdiplomat and Toobigtokale: why does the hook say eight times when the increase, from $12,000 to $113,050, was more than nine times? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 02:01, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
- You are right. It should say nine times. Butterdiplomat (talk) 02:10, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Butterdiplomat and Toobigtokale: why does the hook say eight times when the increase, from $12,000 to $113,050, was more than nine times? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 02:01, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
