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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:00, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

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Improved to Good Article status by Oshwah (talk). Nominated by Samtar (talk) at 09:24, 15 June 2016 (UTC).

  • Looks good, though perhaps reword the latter part of the hook slightly? Windows Mobile is a part of Windows. Perhaps "...send push data to Windows desktop and mobile applications"? Mike1901 (talk) 09:40, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Can't disagree with that, thank you for the suggestion Should I edit the nomination? -- samtar talk or stalk 09:50, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Yes please, if you think it's a good idea - I'd likely only make a mess of it as my DYK experience is lacking! Mike1901 (talk) 09:55, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Done :) that makes two of us! -- samtar talk or stalk 10:16, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Article promoted to GA recently and prose size is long enough. Neutral and cited. Hook is short enough and relatively interesting. From [1] I don't believe that Samtar needs to do QPQ. No image to check. Everything looks good, the only problem I see is the citing of the hook in the article. As far as I can see, the only place the information in the hook is mentioned is in the second sentence of the lead. However, it isn't cited there. Is it mentioned somewhere else? Omni Flames (talk) 01:09, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Omni Flames - see reference 9 - it's basically saying the same thing but in a more technical way. Mike1901 (talk) 06:59, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
*@Mike1901: Okay, I've added that reference to the spot where it talks about it in the lead. Looks good to go now. Omni Flames (talk) 07:05, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
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