Template:Did you know nominations/The Fault in Our Stars (film)

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:48, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

The Fault in Our Stars (film)

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~~... that the film The Fault in Our Stars received a positive reception from critics, is based on the John Green's novel of same name, which is the inspiration of late Esther Earl's life?~~

Improved to Good Article status by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self nominated at 12:21, 18 October 2014 (UTC).

The hook is mixing three unrelated pieces of information: the critical reception, the original book, and the theme that inspired the original book. It may be better if it focus on a single thing, such as "that the film The Fault in Our Stars is based on the John Green's novel of the same name?" Cambalachero (talk) 16:27, 18 October 2014 (UTC)

Yeah I know, we could go with the "the original book, and the theme that inspired the original book" then. Because this is related and it'll attract more readers if we mention the book's inspiration in the hook. --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 18:15, 18 October 2014 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the film The Fault in Our Stars is based on John Green's novel of the same name, inspired by the late Esther Earl's life?
- OK Cambalachero (talk) 12:37, 20 October 2014 (UTC)