- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:18, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
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Taiiku Okazaki edit
- ... that Taiiku Okazaki parodied tropes used in Japanese music videos in a song titled "Music Video"? Source: [1], [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Reborn as a Vending Machine, I Now Wander the Dungeon
- Comment: He will be making a guest appearance in the Pokémon Sun & Moon anime on March 31, so I'm requesting that this go up on that date. Special thanks to Maplestrip who helped out with the precise hook wording on Discord.
Created by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline. QPQ done. However, I think you should try to avoid the repetition in the hook by not naming the song; perhaps you could add a different detail like the fact that it became a viral hit. Yoninah (talk) 22:50, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: What about:
- ALT1 ... that a 2016 song by Taiiku Okazaki became a viral hit in Japan for parodying commonly-used tropes in Japanese music videos?
- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I suggest tweaking it a bit more:
- ALT1a: ... that a 2016 song by Taiiku Okazaki went viral as it parodied commonly-used tropes in Japanese music videos? Yoninah (talk) 22:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: What about:
