Template:Did you know nominations/Tacoma Dome Station
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 04:24, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
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Tacoma Dome Station edit
Tacoma Dome Station
... that Amtrak service at Tacoma Dome Station (pictured) ceased on its inaugural day due to a train derailment?Source: new Amtrak service; derailment and old station
- Reviewed: Aquatica ficta
5x expanded by SounderBruce (talk). Self-nominated at 04:44, 20 December 2017 (UTC).
Size and date check out; hook fact is referenced; a check indicates no copyplag issues should be present. I've taken the liberty of adding one of your photos of the station as an option for the promoter. That said: there is an outstanding citation-needed tag in the article; QPQ is needed; and, on a non-rules note, IMHO the hook might be worded better, as it implies it will never restart. Perhaps "Service was interrupted on its inaugural day..." or something to that effect? - The Bushranger One ping only 06:40, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- @The Bushranger: I have removed the citation needed tag and the claim attached to it, and added a QPQ review. A slightly reworded hook is included below, which I think will work well:
- ALT1: ... that Amtrak service at Tacoma Dome Station (pictured) was halted on its inaugural day due to a train derailment?
- SounderBruce 03:28, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
In fact, that does. This is now good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 03:42, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
- SounderBruce 03:28, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
