Template:Did you know nominations/Solstice (1990 video game)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

Solstice (1990 video game) edit

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~~... that the critically-acclaimed opening theme of the 1990 video game Solstice is the personal favourite work of its composer Tim Follin?~~
- ALT1: ... that the 1990 NES video game Solstice was originally planned and developed as a computer title before its developer won a contract with Nintendo following an early demonstration of the game?

Improved to Good Article status by Cat's Tuxedo (talk). Self-nominated at 19:32, 10 June 2019 (UTC).

I wonder if alternative hooks can be proposed here: the first hook seems okay but it sounds a bit self-promotional. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 14:00, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Added another one. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 16:35, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Hi, yeah, the first one is very promotional in my eyes. The second one isn't sourced here, and in text has sourcing to magazine sources, so I'll WP:AGF on those. It's still a little wordy for me. I prefer "earned" to "won" as well, as it suggests it wasn't a competition. No copyvio issues, nominated in time, and is of sufficient length. Striking the top hook.

Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:59, 4 July 2019 (UTC)