Template:Did you know nominations/Sogenanntes Linksradikales Blasorchester
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:22, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
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Sogenanntes Linksradikales Blasorchester
- ... that the "so-called left-radical wind band" Sogenanntes Linksradikales Blasorchester played at demonstrations against nuclear power and far-right politics, and at the Berliner Philharmonie? Source: several
- Reviewed: Precious Legacy
- Comment: Sorry, I was sure I nominated yesterday, but was probably interrupted and never picked it up.
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 17:16, 28 July 2019 (UTC).
- User:The Rambling Man is welcome to review. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:43, 9 August 2019 (UTC)
Since TRM hasn't responded yet and mainly to help out the backlog over at the WT:DYK unreviewed noms section, I'll be doing a review for now (though he is still free to give comments). The article meets length and creation requirements, no close paraphrasing has been found, I am assuming good faith for the German language sources, the hook is interesting, and a QPQ has been one. There are currently a number of concerns that prevent me from giving the tick at this time, however. Firstly, the sentence mentioning "so-called left-radical wind band" does not have a footnote, nor does the sentence about their performances at anti-nuclear events. Secondly, at 193 characters, the hook may need to be shortened per WP:DYKHOOK and WP:DYKSG#J8; @The Rambling Man: could you suggest a possible shorter form of the original hook, if that would be possible? Thirdly, there is no reference provided for the Members table. Finally, just a suggestion and not an issue (so this won't prevent approval), but for musical bands, it's more common to use the word "disband" instead of "dissolved" so it might be a good idea to use that wording instead. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:40, 11 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, and you seem not to know anything about arbitration enforcement, - keep your innocence. If TRm added a single helpful comment he could be blocked for violating an arbitration restriction. It has just happened to Ritchie. Will look. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:15, 11 August 2019 (UTC)
- The translation of the name is my own, how could I make a footnote? I repeated ref Glandien a few times. Their name is long, which makes the hook long, but I'd miss any of the three things mentioned. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:28, 11 August 2019 (UTC)
- One option, although I'm not sure if you'd like it, would be to omit the name of the group and just pipe it using a shorter phrase. Like for example, instead of
... that the "so-called left-radical wind band" Sogenanntes Linksradikales Blasorchester played
, it could instead say... that a "so-called left-radical wind band" played
or wording to that effect. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:29, 12 August 2019 (UTC)- You might have guessed that I don't like it ;) - The name is a program and provides the German flavour. Without it, it could be anywhere. I'd rather drop to try to translate:
- ALT1: ... that the Sogenanntes Linksradikales Blasorchester wind band played at demonstrations against nuclear power and far-right politics, and at the Berliner Philharmonie?
- ALT1 would have been fine to me (although I very much preferred the original hook), my main concern is that there's no explicit mention of "far-right" anywhere in the article, nor are such beliefs discussed as far as I can tell. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:09, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
- I added a note explaining "Rock gegen Rechts" (Rock against Right), in the German article "ist ein unregelmäßig wiederholtes Motto von Konzertveranstaltungen gegen Rechtsextremismus" = a --- motto of concerts against extreme right nationalism, as in article Far-right politics. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:15, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
- One option, although I'm not sure if you'd like it, would be to omit the name of the group and just pipe it using a shorter phrase. Like for example, instead of
- The article looks better now. I'll try to finish the review by the end of the week. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:32, 28 August 2019 (UTC)
I think the article is almost good to go now, I'd just suggest deleting the "so-called" part from the article body and just leaving it for the lede, there's really no need to mention it twice. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:45, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
- done --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:08, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
Done. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:35, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
