Template:Did you know nominations/Sarah Kyolaba

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:23, 3 July 2015 (UTC)

Sarah Kyolaba edit

Created by Edwardx (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 19:09, 23 June 2015 (UTC).

Interesting life, well told on good sources, the sourced hook as quirky as can be, - I am a bit hesitant about not mentioning her real name but bet on more clicks if not. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:04, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
  • The close paraphrasing needs to be cleaned up before this can proceed.
  • Source: When Kyolaba left Amin in 1982, she took with her the third of her four children, Faisal Wangita. She spent some time working as a lingerie model in Germany before settling in London.
  • Article: Kyolaba left him in 1982, and went to Germany with the third of her four children (three with Amin), Faisal Wangita. She worked there as a lingerie model, before settling in London.
  • Source: In 2007 Faisal was involved in the gang murder of an 18-year-old Somali man in Camden, and was convicted of conspiracy to wound. He was jailed for five years and later deported back to Uganda.
  • Article: On 3 August 2007, her son, Faisal Wangita, was found guilty of involvement in the gang murder of an 18-year-old Somali man in Camden. He was convicted of conspiracy to wound, jailed for five years, and later deported back to Uganda.
  • Yoninah (talk) 22:29, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
Revised: Kyolaba separated from Amin in 1982, and travelled to Germany with Faisal Wangita, one of her four children (three with Amin), where she worked as a lingerie model. She later moved to London.
Revised: On 3 August 2007, her son, Faisal Wangita, was convicted of conspiracy to wound and jailed for five years for involvement in the gang murder of an 18-year-old Somali man. He was deported to Uganda after the end of his sentence. Philafrenzy (talk) 22:49, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per Gerda Arendt's review. Yoninah (talk) 00:38, 3 July 2015 (UTC)