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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:02, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
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San Blas jay, Purplish-backed jay edit
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... that breeding San Blas jays and purplish-backed jays are helped by other members of their groups to raise their young?
- Reviewed: Jorge Triana Tena
- Comment: Also reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Jorge Ramos Hernández
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 09:24, 20 July 2016 (UTC).
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- Well, these are social birds living in small groups, which I guess may or may not be closely related to each other. Can you think of a better word? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
- "members of their social groups"? (Or maybe, "It takes a village"?) EEng 14:17, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
- OK, how about:-
- ALT1 ... that breeding San Blas jays and purplish-backed jays are helped by other members of their social groups to raise their young?
- ALT2 ... that San Blas jays and purplish-backed jays both form social groups in which females are helped by other members to raise their young?
- Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:09, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
- OK, how about:-
- "members of their social groups"? (Or maybe, "It takes a village"?) EEng 14:17, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
- Well, these are social birds living in small groups, which I guess may or may not be closely related to each other. Can you think of a better word? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
- Review of San Blas jay
No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article has been expanded from 172 chars to 2024 chars since 03:17, 19 November 2015 (UTC), a 11.77-fold expansion
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2024 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely (2.9% confidence; confirm)
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- Review of Purplish-backed jay
- No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article has been expanded from 178 chars to 2667 chars since 08:03, 14 July 2014 (UTC), a 14.98-fold expansion
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2667 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely (5.7% confidence; confirm)
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- General comments
- No overall issues detected
- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length for 2 nominations at 114 characters (83 after subtracting extra links)
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length for 2 nominations at 121 characters (90 after subtracting extra links)
- ✓ The hook ALT2 is an appropriate length for 2 nominations at 130 characters (99 after subtracting extra links)
- ✓ The hook ALT3 is an appropriate length for 2 nominations at 104 characters (73 after subtracting extra links)
- ✓ Cwmhiraeth has more than 5 DYK credits. 2 QPQ reviews of Template:Did you know nominations/Jorge Triana Tena,Template:Did you know nominations/Jorge Ramos Hernández were performed for this nomination.
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- ALT3 ... that San Blas jays and purplish-backed jays both form social groups which cooperate in the raising of young? EEng 18:01, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
Looks like the original reviewer proposed a hook, so a fresh review is needed. Article meets all DYK parameters for length, sourcing, no close paraphrasing. ALT3 is an acceptable hook and appears to address concerns with phrasing of earlier hooks. Good to go. Montanabw(talk) 04:01, 11 August 2016 (UTC)