- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Vanamonde (talk) 04:59, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
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Redthroat edit
- ... that the redthroat has been known to mimic the non-vocal sound of a crested pigeon in flight? ">Higgins, PJ; Peter, JM (2002). Handbook of Australian, New Zealand and Antarctic birds. Volume 6: Pardalotes to shrike-thrushes. Melbourne: Oxford University Press. ISBN 0 19 553244 9. (source offline)
- ALT1: * ... that the ground-dwelling redthroat bird can imitate the sound of a crested pigeon in flight?
5x expanded by Craig Dunne (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 00:57, 21 June 2017 (UTC).
Promising article about an interesting bird, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Please go over the prose once more. "Which makes the identification of females and juveniles more difficult." is no proper sentence, and unclear to me even if it was connected to the sentence before. - In the hook, how about including "mimic the calls of numerous other birds and even the non-vocal sound ...!? Something like that, you do it, or I can't review ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:52, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
Article has been expanded and is NPOV. I propose ALT1 above as it's clearer for the less ornithologically inclined. Morganfitzp (talk) 19:50, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
