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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 00:50, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

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Paul Nahaolelua
Paul Nahaolelua

Source: Dabagh, Jean, ed. (1974). "A King is Elected: One Hundred Years Ago". The Hawaiian Journal of History. 8. Honolulu: Hawaiian Historical Society: 76–89. hdl:10524/112. OCLC 60626541.; Hawaii (1918). Lydecker, Robert Colfax (ed.). Roster Legislatures of Hawaii, 1841–1918. Honolulu: Hawaiian Gazette Company. pp. 124, 127. OCLC 60737418.; Kuykendall, Ralph Simpson (1967). The Hawaiian Kingdom 1874–1893, The Kalakaua Dynasty. Vol. 3. Honolulu: University of Hawaii Press. pp. 3–16. ISBN 978-0-87022-433-1. OCLC 500374815.

Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 10:00, 28 October 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius - (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)

  • @KAVEBEAR: So far, so good. In ALT2, though, you spelled "assembly" wrong. Otherwise, it's interesting that someone was president during two kings' elections. A monarchy and presidency is not very common, so they're interesting. epicgenius - (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
  • This is all good, except: do you want readers to know that he is specifically the president of Hawaii's Legislative assembly during this time, or do you want to keep this as an element of surprise? epicgenius - (talk) 17:23, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
  • @Epicgenius: I wanted to keep it simply president for an element of surprise especially if the hook can be on the main page on Election Day. KAVEBEAR (talk) 18:01, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Then the first hook (that Paul Nahaolelua (pictured) was president during the elections of two Kings of Hawaii) is good to go. It's the most interesting and concise. epicgenius - (talk) 18:19, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
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