Template:Did you know nominations/Patrick Omameh

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:56, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Patrick Omameh

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Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 17:23, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

  • This is not a full review, just a quick one. The hook is too long (209 characters), this should be under 200 characters per WP:Hook. Zia Khan 04:41, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
Without the characters for "(pictured)" it is below 200.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:45, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
I'd prefer to include 24-man as follows.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:26, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
  • New article, length's good, image is OK, QPQ done. I would go for ALT 1. Zia Khan 12:54, 28 November 2012 (UTC)