Template:Did you know nominations/No More Hell to Pay

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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 00:04, 19 December 2013 (UTC)

No More Hell to Pay edit

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... that critics praised the band Stryper for featuring their classic 1980s sound on their latest album No More Hell to Pay?

Created by HotHat (talk). Nominated by 3family6 (talk) at 20:36, 8 November 2013 (UTC).

Bit of a quote farm - might need some more original text here. Gatoclass (talk) 05:23, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

I'll work at it.--¿3family6 _contribs 14:49, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

Done. If it still needs work, let me know, please.--¿3family6 _contribs 18:55, 10 November 2013 (UTC)

As Gatoclass says "bit of a quote farm" and as 3family says "If it still needs work" and goes on to say "let me know". I have to say that it does need more "work". Nearly every sentence that I looked at had someone's name and quote marks in it. Can you synthesize the information and use references if you want to credit the occasional quote.... and find a nuetral view? Victuallers (talk) 10:27, 27 November 2013 (UTC)

I've done some summarizing and quote reduction. I'm trying to strike a balance between summarizing content and including the perspectives of particular critics, especially in the review section.--¿3family6 _contribs 03:45, 29 November 2013 (UTC)

I am so sorry about the quotes in the article, which I will work on doing a better job in the future with respect to other articles that I will be creating on Wikipedia.HotHat (talk) 06:27, 29 November 2013 (UTC)

Extensive revision has been done; this needs a complete new review from the ground up, though keeping in mind whether previous issues have been sufficiently dealt with. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 07:15, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

Long enough, new enough, no QPQ necessary. I have fixed the referencing in #Commercial performance and #Track listing. Hook is sourced. Good to go.--Laun chba ller 13:41, 16 December 2013 (UTC)