Template:Did you know nominations/Nicholas Snowman

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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 13:30, 10 May 2014 (UTC)

Nicholas Snowman edit

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... that Nicholas Snowman is the third generation chairman of the jewellers Wartski, who made the ring for the 2011 Wedding of Prince William and Catherine Middleton?

Reviewed: Arboretum Norr
Comment: His father Kenneth has recently featured on DYK, and his grandfather Emanuel is also the subject of a DYK nomination. Better hook ideas welcome!

Alt: "that Nicholas Snowman is chairman of Wartski, who made the ring for the 2011 Wedding of Prince William and Catherine Middleton?

Slightly better? Still not strong. Wartski on its own is more curious? Philafrenzy (talk) 12:41, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Created by Edwardx (talk). Self nominated at 08:59, 9 May 2014 (UTC).

I like the original hook - I think it is fascinating that he is third generation. age, hook and size all check out. No close paraphrasing seen. Material true to sources. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:39, 10 May 2014 (UTC)