- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:25, 15 May 2017 (UTC)
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Mariano Gagnon
edit- ... that Mariano Gagnon was a Franciscan friar who organized airlifts to help refugees escape the Shining Path? Source: "In desperation, Gagnon organized 20 rescue missions by air to fly the Indians out of the area..." [1] p. 161
- ALT1:... that Mariano Gagnon dropped salt and Christmas presents to indigenous people from an airplane while their mission was being attacked by the Shining Path? Source: "On Dec. 26, Mariano flew over an area near the mission, and saw a group of natives. They made signals telling him not to land, that there was great danger. He dropped them salt and Christmas presents." [2]
- Reviewed: This would be 5th DYK credit, so last without QPQ.
- Comment: Preference for ALT0 expressed on talk page. I think ALT1 is slighly more interesting, but ALT0 has the advantage of clarity, so I don't have a strong preference.
Created by Waymaneddy (talk), CaroleHenson (talk), and TonyBallioni (talk). Nominated by TonyBallioni (talk) at 19:10, 2 May 2017 (UTC).
Interesting life, covered in detail on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I made minor copy-edits, please feel free to revert when I went wrong. - Hook: I prefer ALT0, to the point! The other is also good, but "mission" is ambiguous without context, - would need a link. - Article: I never heard of studying religion. Theology? There's a longish quote at the end of Early life ... which seems not to end where the quotation marks are. Please clarify, and every quote needs a ref right after it. - How do you feel about an infobox? - Almost there! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:40, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you, Gerda! CaroleHenson added the quote at the end of early life, so I'll defer to her on fixing that. I've removed religion all together. It was a minor seminary (secondary school), so the phrasing of a specific course of study is a bit odd. I'd be fine with an infobox at some point, but I don't think it would be useful now. We don't really have specific dates on anything yet, just years, and lack a free image of him. Neither one of those is killer, but combined I don't think it would make a good infobox. The US obituary should be out soon, so hopefully then we can get specific dates. TonyBallioni (talk) 14:54, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Hi Gerda Arendt, The quotation marks are around the part that is a direct quote - the rest is paraphrased from the article.–CaroleHenson (talk) 15:21, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Carole and Gerda, I've added a direct cite to the end of the quotes and updated the paraphrase to make it feel less like a direct quote. I think this addresses all the issues. TonyBallioni (talk) 15:25, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- TonyBallioni - Thanks, my brain is fuzzy today and I wasn't quick on the uptake.–CaroleHenson (talk) 15:28, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
thank you, both! Original hook preferred, the other would still need a link. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:36, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, I think we're all fine with ALT0. TonyBallioni (talk) 15:43, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- TonyBallioni - Thanks, my brain is fuzzy today and I wasn't quick on the uptake.–CaroleHenson (talk) 15:28, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Carole and Gerda, I've added a direct cite to the end of the quotes and updated the paraphrase to make it feel less like a direct quote. I think this addresses all the issues. TonyBallioni (talk) 15:25, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- Hi Gerda Arendt, The quotation marks are around the part that is a direct quote - the rest is paraphrased from the article.–CaroleHenson (talk) 15:21, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
