Template:Did you know nominations/Klesie Kelly

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:51, 7 August 2014 (UTC)

Klesie Kelly edit

  • ... that Klesie Kelly, soprano and academic voice teacher, recorded evening- and love songs for voices and instrumental soloists with tenor Ian Partridge?

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 10:44, 4 August 2014 (UTC).

  • New, long enough and neutral.
  • Citations OK. Can you please either blue-link 'Kentucky' in the text, or give the place in Kentucky where she was born?
  • No apparent plagiarism issues, I'm happy to AGF.
  • Hook: No useful English word for 'Abendlieder' and 'evening-songs' is I think awkward in English - how about just leaving this out? ('recorded love songs....'). Citation is fine, hook fact accurate and neutral.
  • QPQ done.
Nearly there - can you deal with the two queries? after which I am happy to give the green tick.--Smerus (talk) 15:19, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
Thank you! Linked Kentucky, - it was a time when people avoided giving private information, no year of birth, no town given. It's truly amazing how many students show up if you google her name. She was outstanding in Elias and David, - with some good luck I may find the reviews which are not where they belong ;)
ALT1: ... that Klesie Kelly, soprano and academic voice teacher in Cologne, recorded love songs for voices and instrumental soloists with tenor Ian Partridge? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:04, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
Bit longer but still well under 200 characters......Good to go!!--Smerus (talk) 19:58, 5 August 2014 (UTC)