Template:Did you know nominations/Kandia Crazy Horse
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 09:41, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
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Kandia Crazy Horse edit
- ... that when Kandia Crazy Horse started as a music journalist, she was considered a "novelty" because "a black, young female wasn't the picture of a rock critic"?
- Reviewed: Hotel Bora Bora
Created by Megalibrarygirl (talk). Nominated by Miyagawa (talk) at 21:06, 14 January 2016 (UTC).
Nice news about an interesting woman, on very detailed sources. Can you draw a bit more from the sources what she would comment? And/or her own style? How do you feel about an infobox? The hook is fine and sourced - her name alone is hooky - but I would find "Roll over Beethoven ..." even more interesting. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:36, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, how about Alt1:... that while at Princeton University, Kandia Crazy Horse taught the course "Roll Over Beethoven: Black Rock and Cultural Revolt"? Miyagawa (talk) 15:36, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you! Subscription sources accepted AGF. How about rewording (readers should click her, not Princeton):
- ALT2: ... that Kandia Crazy Horse taught the course "Roll Over Beethoven: Black Rock and Cultural Revolt" at Princeton University? Or even stop after Revolt?
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:52, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, how about Alt1:... that while at Princeton University, Kandia Crazy Horse taught the course "Roll Over Beethoven: Black Rock and Cultural Revolt"? Miyagawa (talk) 15:36, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
