Template:Did you know nominations/John C. Colt

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:34, 29 October 2011 (UTC)

John C. Colt edit

  • ... that John C. Colt, the brother of Samuel Colt, murdered a printer named Samuel Adams and disposed of his body in a method that may have influenced Edgar Allen Poe's story, The Oblong Box?

Created/expanded by Mike Searson (talk). Self nom at 23:33, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

  • Date and length both check out. AGF for offline source. But the article states that Adams's murder may have influenced The Oblong Box. The hook should perhaps reflect this. A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 14:41, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
  • This looks like a candidate for Halloween, with a little reworking of the hook to make it spookier. --Orlady (talk) 14:39, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
I was thinking the same while I was writing it. I suck at writing hooks and am afraid I'll either make a "spookier" one either too corny or gory, though.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 14:54, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
  • OK, here's an idea (and I'm going to move this down to the Halloween holding area):
Very good, I like it!--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 02:47, 14 October 2011 (UTC)