Template:Did you know nominations/Johanna Geisler

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 17:01, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

Johanna Geisler

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Storye book (talk) at 18:48, 10 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Johanna Geisler; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Thank you for the nomination, Storye book. Supplying qpq. I wrote the article to fill a red link in the FAC of her famous husband, and found her story just too good to not be told, especially in women's month.
I believe that a premiere of one opera in two cities (ALT2) is unique while the banning of pieces by the Nazis sadly was for many, also happened more than a decade after the performance, when the two people had already left the country. Marietta's song is rather popular as a stand-alone piece in recitals, and the story of the opera (title translating as The Dead City, meaning Brugge where it plays) is unusual: a man whose wife died meets a woman who resembles the dead and falls in love with her, but she has problems with being loved not for being her (rather wild) self but his memory of another.
I think the imminent danger is obvious without explicitly stating that works by Jewish people would be banned, which many readers will know. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:43, 10 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Update: The hooks and article are now ready for review. Note that the creator of the article Gerda Arendt has elected not to take an active part in his nom, so please ping me, Storye book, re hooks, citations, whatever. Thank you. Storye book (talk) 16:27, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
  • A very interesting article here, with a QPQ done. As the sources are either in a foreign language or offline I will assume good faith in the sourcing. A QPQ has also been done. Among the hooks proposed, I'm most partial to ALT1 and ALT2 (with a slight preference to ALT2); however, my concern is that ALT2 seems to be less about Geisler but more about Die tote Stadt. If we have to go with that angle, since I think it's more intriguing to a non-specialist audience that there was a simultaneous premiere of the opera, what I'd suggest here is some variant of ALT2 which focuses more on Stadt be proposed; maybe even try to bring it to GA status so that it can be a double hook. Something like "that Die tote Stadt had simultaneous premieres, one with Johanna..." or something like that. But if that fails, then ALT1 is a decent alternative (I am usually not a fan of "X played Y in Z" hooks, but I think the fact that she appeared in a premiere conducted by her husband adds intriguingness in this case). Though perhaps in the case of ALT1, I'd suggest dropping the mention of Marietta and just focus on the "she appeared in a world premiere conducted by her husband" aspect. All other hook options are struck. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:24, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
Thanks! Those are fine. I'm approving both hooks: I do have a slight preference for ALT2a per my previous comments, but I will leave the choice to the promoter. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:27, 12 March 2023 (UTC)