Template:Did you know nominations/Jeju Oreum

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 19:47, 16 June 2018 (UTC)

Jeju Oreum edit

  • ... that Jeju Oreum is an area of outstanding natural beauty in South Korea?

Created/expanded by Yeon So Jeong (talk) and Na Jieun (talk). Nominated by Yeon So Jeong (talk) at 08:06, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Note: this nomination was not transcluded after it was created, but after being contacted a couple of days ago, nominator Yeon So Jeong has expressed a desire that it be revived, which typically DYK allows for untranscluded nominations. So even though this will be filed under 27 March 2018, the newness should be based on the original nomination date of 18 December 2017. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:31, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
This article was written in English so do not need to translate into English.Yeon So Jeong (talk) 06:15, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yeon So Jeong: we're referring to English grammar. The first sentence, for example, has noun-verb confusion: Jeju Oreum (Hangul: 오름, Hanja: 岳) is the rising small defunct volcanoes in the Jeju Island in South Korea. If you apply at WP:GOCE they can help you with the grammar. Yoninah (talk) 10:19, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
  • Two issues here: one, the article has not been significantly edited in several weeks, and two, the hook is rather vague and doesn't really describe the subject matter. @Yeon So Jeong:, please address the issues as soon as possible. Courtesy ping to Yoninah. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 16:59, 7 June 2018 (UTC)
  • It is time to close this nomination as unsuccessful, unfortunately. I rescued it after it had not been transcluded back in December, with the assurance that Yeon So Jeong would be taking care of any issues raised. This has not been done. There have been sufficient enough issues with the English prose that one reviewer thought it was translated from another language; it is, in fact, created in English, but the prose is not adequate for it to be run at DYK on the main page. The prose hasn't been adequately improved since then, and the nomination is now nearly six months old. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:13, 16 June 2018 (UTC)