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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:09, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

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  • ... that Inori Minase participated in a voice acting audition after her mother read an advertisement for it in a magazine? Source: [1] "水瀬　デビューのきっかけは、今所属している事務所のオーディションを受けたことです。それも自分の意思ではなく、母が雑誌で見つけてきて。" "声優の養成所に入ることも検討していたのですが、お母さんに「まだ若いんだし挑戦してみようよ！」と言われてオーディションを受けたところ、結果的に合格しました。"
    • ALT1:... that Inori Minase began aspiring to become a voice actor at the age of six? Source: [2] "━━声優になりたいとはっきり意識したのは何歳ぐらいですか？水瀬　6歳とか。"
    • ALT2:... that Inori Minase became interested in voice acting after reading a pamphlet of a stage play adaptation of an anime? Source: [3] "ある時に、その作品の劇場版アニメを観にいった時に、パンフレットに声優さんのお名前が載っているのを見て、「この人、誰だろう？」と思ったんですね。幼い私からすれば、アニメの中のキャラクターも現実で生きていると思っていたので、母と父に聞いたら、「声優という職業があって、アニメのキャラを演じる中の人なんだよ」と。"

5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:52, 31 March 2018 (UTC).

  • 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done.
  • Sorry, but I don't find any of the hooks hooky. I notice that she's releasing her second album on May 23. Since we're almost there, what do you think about saying something about her and tying it in to her second album release? ("... that Inori Minase, who _________, is releasing her second album today?") For the fill-in, did she really record her first voice-acting role at age 15? Yoninah (talk) 22:36, 22 April 2018 (UTC)
@Yoninah: As far as I know, yes she indeed played her first role at the age of 15. As for your suggestion, how about:
Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:51, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
  • The ALT3 hook is fine, but where does it say she's "known" for that role? Yoninah (talk) 11:10, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
@Yoninah: I suppose the lead. Should I rewrite the lead to reflect this suggestion? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:12, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
  • The hook fact needs to be cited to an independent source. Yoninah (talk) 16:15, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Not really. I don't understand why you choose to mentioning her acting in a role that very few people, world-wise, will have any knowledge of, and not mention something that would have more universal appeal, like her winning the award mentioned in that source? Yoninah (talk) 21:07, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
@Yoninah: Is that a better hook? Though the reason why I used Hestia in ALT3 is because Hestia became a pretty popular meme for a while (as noted in Hestia's article). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 21:31, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Well, in the absence of a solid citation, the Hestia hook won't pass. ALT4 is very good. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT4 good to go for May 23. Yoninah (talk) 21:41, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: Just a question since this needs to be addressed before this goes up next month: should all the roles in the "Filmography" section have references? During this nomination, I had removed all the roles that I couldn't find references for, but this was reverted by another user, InorinOtakuP. Should the roles stay unreferenced, or should the unreferenced roles be removed or commented out? I tried looking for references for the unsourced roles but it was impossible for some of them. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:09, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
  • My understanding is that if there's at least one citation in a box, it's enough to satisfy Rule D2. So the boxes look fine. For the TV drama listings, I would even claim that such listings are similar to books in a bibliography section, which don't need to be sourced at all. The only thing here that needs to be sourced, IMO, is the peak chart position, and that is sourced. So this is still good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:14, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
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