Template:Did you know nominations/Hollis Dow Hedberg, San Tomé, Venezuela
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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 22:51, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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Hollis Dow Hedberg, San Tomé, Venezuela edit
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- ... that Hollis Dow Hedberg, the geologist and petroleum specialist of the Gulf Oil Company, served in San Tomé, Venezuela?
Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk), and Zyxw (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 14:24, 10 June 2013 (UTC).
Both are new/expanded, long enough, within policy. I think the hook could be better, more precise, more in-keeping with the sources. What do you think of ALT: ... that Hollis Dow Hedberg led the Gulf Oil Corporation's geological operations in San Tomé and eastern Venezuela? The article citations would need to be updated. I used the National Academy of Sciences PDF cited on San Tomé (p. 215–6). Otherwise, "specialist" is vague with the current nom. czar · · 00:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Revised ALT hook is fine. In the article I have replaced the word 'specialist' with "scientist".--Nvvchar. 01:56, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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