Template:Did you know nominations/Herr, du bist mein Leben
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The result was: promoted by Kingsif (talk) 11:07, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
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Herr, du bist mein Leben
- ... that "Herr, du bist mein Leben" (Lord, You are my life), was chosen by Reinhard Heuke, a bishop of Erfurt, as the focus of a sermon when it was a new song in a new hymnal? Source: [1]
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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 18:25, 18 April 2021 (UTC).
- Please provide the quote, in the original language, supporting the hook. Thanks.
- Why do you have "!" in the hook?
- "The hymn was translated in 1978 to German by Christoph Biskupek, a priest.[3]" [3] doesn't say 1978. Also, "translated to German" → "translated into German".
- Otherwise written beautifully.
- Size good, new enough, source quality okay.
- QPQ
notdone. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 20:38, 24 April 2021 (UTC)- I fixed the typo, but am too tired for more. Will be late tomorrow, I guess. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:41, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Ahmad, sorry, two great singers died whose articles needed care, so I postponed longer than expected. Whicih quote? Gotteslob was introduced in 2013, some liked the old one better, but this man focused on a song new in this book. - 1978 is given in sources as year for the translated hymn. How can we say that therefore it must have been translated in 1977 or 1978, without clumsiness? - I reviewed now Template:Did you know nominations/Meeri Kalavainen. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:48, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Gerda, I meant the reference for the hook. Currently it is linked to a website but I can't find where does the source say what you have in the hook. Would you mind quoting from the source? Thanks. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 02:59, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
- I see, and sorry, no ;) - The two singers, and a third found on the way, still need massive work, and a schloss is due for DYK today and not long enough ... - I'd have to translate the whole thing to substantiate that he "focused" on it.
- ALT1: ... that "Herr, du bist mein Leben" (Lord, You are my life), a translation of a popular Italian 1977 "Symbolum" with text and music by Pierangelo Sequeri, was included in the next German Catholic hymnal? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:16, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
- Gerda, I meant the reference for the hook. Currently it is linked to a website but I can't find where does the source say what you have in the hook. Would you mind quoting from the source? Thanks. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 02:59, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
Pass with ALT1. Thanks for the new hook. It sounds more interesting than the original. I made a minor change (adding comma). AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:30, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
