Template:Did you know nominations/Halfway (EastEnders)

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The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:17, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Halfway (EastEnders) edit

  • Reviewed: Mary Burger
  • Comment: Feel free to edit the hooks.

Moved to mainspace by Soaper1234 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:29, 20 May 2018 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough and moved into the mainspace with in the correct time frame. Carried out spot checks, all checks out and the article is fully sourced. No block quoting or over use of quotes. Ref provided for both hooks. I prefer ALT 1. Good to go.Rain the 1 21:38, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
*ALT2: ... that EastEnders producers decided to explore a darker side to character Halfway by introducing his brother?
  • I think you could do something with "Dude, what have you done?" here.... like "... that actor Tony Clay was asked "dude, what have you done?" on Twitter when his EastEnders character Halfway shot Mick Carter?" I dunno, but something like that. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:57, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
  • @The Rambling Man: What about phrasing it like this? Soaper1234 - talk 10:39, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
  • ALT4: ... that actor Tony Clay was asked "Dude, what have you done?" on Twitter when his EastEnders character, Halfway, shot a popular character?
  • @Soaper1234: I'll wait for others to work out the hook. One thought: Could you start a page on Tony Clay? Even it's a stub, it will help the hook from having a redirect in it. Alternately, you could get a double hook out of it. Yoninah (talk) 20:15, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: A page was created for him, but it was deleted as it lacked notability. There isn't loads of sources about him out there either so I wouldn't be able to make him an article, sorry. Soaper1234 - talk 21:17, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
I would like you to proceed Alt 4, which an above editor suggested the phrase "Dude, what have you done?" be used in the new hook. I think that is more interesting than the original hooks. I think it is good to go forward with this now.Rain the 1 21:21, 22 June 2018 (UTC)