Template:Did you know nominations/Golf Ball

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:46, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Golf Ball

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Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 20:08, 20 May 2012 (UTC)

Needs to include a golf ball. I wonder if ALT 1 is more interesting than ALT 2. --George Ho (talk) 20:09, 4 June 2012 (UTC)

  • New enough and long enough at the time of nomination. Article is fully supported by inline citations. Hooks are supported by article. QPQ completed. Alt3 appears to be supported by hook and support from commentors. Image on article has fair use rationale and is not included in hook. Article reads as neutral enough.
  • Sources support hooked text, sources support text, sources were not plagiarised to write the article. --LauraHale (talk) 04:19, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Good to go with Alt3. --LauraHale (talk) 04:19, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Above it says "Needs to include a golf ball." Why? The hook would be much better without the redundant "which depicts a golf ball". MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 23:36, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Propose an alt4 the nominator will be happy with and that we can verify source wise again? Otherwise, alt3 per nominator and review. --LauraHale (talk) 23:43, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Actually, I just noticed that ALT4 is identical to the original hook, except I made the "p" in "pre" lower case. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:12, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Good to go with Alt3 or Alt4 per mover's preference. --LauraHale (talk) 00:22, 11 June 2012 (UTC)