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The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:33, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Divertimento (Bernstein)

Bernstein in 1977
Bernstein in 1977

Created by Ron Oliver (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 11:08, 16 August 2022 (UTC).

  • Just a comment, no review: How about
  • ALT1: ... that at its premiere at Symphony Hall, Leonard Bernstein (pictured) described his Divertimento suite as a "fun piece" that "reflects my youthful experiences here where I heard my first orchestral music"?
as an alternate hook? --LordPeterII (talk) 10:57, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
Article just barely scrapes by the seven-day requirement for either creation or 5x expansion. A QPQ has been done and no close paraphrasing was detected. Both hooks are cited inline and are interesting. Both are cited to offline sources so AGF accepted. I have a slight preference for ALT1 but ALT0 is also a decent hook; I will leave the final choice to the promoter. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:26, 23 August 2022 (UTC)