- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:41, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
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Claus Guth
Claus Guth in 2004
... that Claus Guth (pictured), recognised internationally when he directed the premiere of Cronaca del luogo at the Salzburg Festival, staged Dialogues des Carmélites in 2021 in Frankfurt?Source: several
- Reviewed: Kokawa-dera Engi Emaki
- Comment: If the Poulenc gets mentioned for the conductor we can turn to the Faust award, but it is in danger. - Sorry, I should have nominated yesterday but had a very busy day.
Created by LouisAlain (talk), Grimes2 (talk), and Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 09:43, 30 July 2021 (UTC).
- ALT1:
... that Claus Guth (pictured), recognised internationally when he directed the 1999 premiere of Berio's Cronaca del luogo at the Salzburg Festival, has been awarded later two Der Faust?Grimes2 (talk) 13:07, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for the offer, but I believe that it would be better to link to an opera than the award, and also that Der Faust is not as well known as the Grammies. Anyway, if that line, perhaps:
- ALT1a:
... that Claus Guth (pictured), recognised internationally since he directed the 1999 premiere of Berio's Cronaca del luogo at the Salzburg Festival, later received two Faust awards?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:30, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1:
Article meets requirements, no close paraphrasing found, QPQ done. ALT1a is okay but the phrasing is a bit strange, particularly the "recognised internationally since he directed the 1999 premiere" wording. Perhaps that part could be rephrased to something like "recognized internationally for..." or wording to that effect? The hook fact itself is fine, the wording just needs to be fixed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:09, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1b: ... that Claus Guth (pictured), recognised internationally for directing the 1999 premiere of Berio's Cronaca del luogo at the Salzburg Festival, later received two Faust awards? Grimes2 (talk) 08:14, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, we are almost good to go. ALT1b is tentatively approved, the only remaining issues with the article are that the paragraph that starts with "Interested in the works by Richard Strauss" does not have a footnote, and that him receiving two Faust awards is not explicitly mentioned in the prose: I'd suggest adding it to the article somewhere with references, as opposed to just the Awards section. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:20, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Done Grimes2 (talk) 08:28, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for the edit; however, the "He received two Faust awards." phrase is still missing a footnote. The nom will be approved once that is resolved. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:15, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Resolved. Grimes2 (talk) 09:20, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you.
ALT1b is good to go. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:21, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you.
- Resolved. Grimes2 (talk) 09:20, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for the edit; however, the "He received two Faust awards." phrase is still missing a footnote. The nom will be approved once that is resolved. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:15, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, we are almost good to go. ALT1b is tentatively approved, the only remaining issues with the article are that the paragraph that starts with "Interested in the works by Richard Strauss" does not have a footnote, and that him receiving two Faust awards is not explicitly mentioned in the prose: I'd suggest adding it to the article somewhere with references, as opposed to just the Awards section. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:20, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1b: ... that Claus Guth (pictured), recognised internationally for directing the 1999 premiere of Berio's Cronaca del luogo at the Salzburg Festival, later received two Faust awards? Grimes2 (talk) 08:14, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
