Template:Did you know nominations/Center Square/Hudson–Park Historic District

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 10:32, 5 August 2012 (UTC)

Center Square/Hudson–Park Historic District edit

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... that the Center Square/Hudson–Park Historic District (Hamilton Street, pictured) includes the first black church in Albany, New York, and the house where Legs Diamond was murdered?

ALT1:... that although the Albany, New York, neighborhoods of Center Square and Hudson–Park (Hamilton Street, pictured) were developed in the 19th century, they were unnamed until neighborhood associations were formed in the 20th?
Reviewed: Jebel Musa (Morocco)
Comment: Again, sorry for the delay. I got sidetracked doing some categorization work at Commons.

Created/expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Self nom at 05:44, 28 July 2012 (UTC)

Article is expanded 5 fold and new enough expansion. All images have acceptable main page copyrights. Image in hook appears in the article. QPQ done. Article is neutral enough. Hooked fact found in article and supported by inline citations.
Offline sources support text and were not plagiarised to write the article.
Two unsourced paragraphs. They don't appear to be summary style pre-leads as they contain new information. --LauraHale (talk) 03:41, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Which ones? Daniel Case (talk) 21:32, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Fact tags added. --LauraHale (talk) 21:36, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Done Daniel Case (talk) 17:52, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

ALT1 is over the 200 character maximum and is not eligible for use with the picture. ("pictured" doesn't count; "Hamilton Street," puts the hook over 200). BlueMoonset (talk) 05:00, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Not a problem; I didn't have the time to do a character count before putting it up. Will amend. Daniel Case (talk) 21:32, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Here's a shorter version of that hook for you, Daniel:

... that the 19th-century Albany, New York, neighborhoods of Center Square and Hudson–Park (Hamilton Street, pictured) were unnamed until neighborhood associations were formed in the 20th century? --Orlady (talk) 19:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Good to go on Orlady's hook assuming no objections from Daniel Case. --LauraHale (talk) 00:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

I have none. I do think the Legs Diamond hook is sexier, but I can't see how to make it shorter, and to be fair this one goes better with the picture. Daniel Case (talk) 06:26, 31 July 2012 (UTC)