Template:Did you know nominations/Caroline von Briest

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 22:10, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Caroline von Briest edit

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~~... that Caroline von Briest (pictured) of Nennhausen abandoned her originality in favour of imitating the writing style of her husband, Friedrich de la Motte Fouqué?~~

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Created by Rosiestep (talk), Victuallers (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 18:56, 16 March 2014 (UTC).

Another interesting woman, well sourced, nicely illustrated with a licensed image. The hook is good and sourced offline, accepted AGF. I am not so happy with the amount of attention for her husband. What do you think of something around "Some of her narrative poems are distinguished for their insight into matters of the human, particularly the feminine, heart." - for my feminine heart? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:13, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

For all the feminine hearts out there, I agree that ALT1 is the better hook, especially as this is Women's History Month. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Word it, please, - I can't - or can't approve, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:39, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Caroline von Briest's (pictured) narrative poems offer insight into matters of the feminine heart? --Rosiestep (talk) 14:30, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Fine, only I don't like pictured between a genitive and what is awaited, and we have room for "human" also ;)

ALT2: ... that Caroline von Briest (pictured) offers in narrative poems "insight into matters of the human, particularly the feminine heart"?

ALT1 and ALT2, prefer the latter, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:36, 25 March 2014 (UTC)