Template:Did you know nominations/Bermuda fish chowder
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:39, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
Bermuda fish chowder edit
- ... that Bermuda fish chowder is the national dish of Bermuda?
Created/expanded by Shirt58 (talk). Self nom at 12:40, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
my appetite is there, but at present I see only 1453 chars of prose. Please add some spices. Also I guess you will have to do a review, right? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:59, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Problem: I don't like wordiness
- Solution:
Whereas the matter of Shirt58 v WP:DYK, of inst 5 March 2012 (UTC) and now under interlocutory motions as the matter of Shirt58 v WP:DYK, ex rel Gerda Arendt 12 March 2012 (UTC), those parties hereinafter respectively referred to as "the DYK nominator", "English language DYK nomination process" broadly construed, and "the intervenor"...I'll make it a little longer. :-) --Shirt58 (talk) 13:39, 12 March 2012 (UTC)- Delicious. My English is limited, legal English even more so, thanks for improving it! :) I just nominated a (lost) Bach cantata - latish - if you are looking for something to review, BWV 80a :) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:47, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Hint: the lead should be a summary (no refs) of referenced statements in the article. Try that, it may be sufficient, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:21, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
spiced and sourced (sauced?), --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:40, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
