Template:Did you know nominations/Babette Hughes

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 7 June 2017 (UTC)

Babette Hughes edit

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... ~~that American playwright Babette Hughes wrote a fictional ending to the actual George Weyerhaeuser kidnapping in a piece for the Seattle Daily Times?~~

Reviewed: Electrada

Created by SL93 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:13, 6 May 2017 (UTC).

Article length and date checked. Hook cited. QPQ done. - PM800 (talk) 06:10, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

It's not a bad hook, but wouldn't the following be punchier?

ALT1 ... that a play by Babette Hughes was performed in 1938 by six blind actresses?

—David Eppstein (talk) 22:23, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

That might be better, also because the kidnapping article isn't that great. SL93 (talk) 23:18, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

ALT needs to be looked at. SL93 (talk) 21:37, 12 May 2017 (UTC)

New enough=nom on creation date; long enough=3297 char; neutral with in-line sources, no apparent copyvios; hook at 76 char is under maximum. Love the hook and it is verified by the source cited. QPQ done. No image. GTG. SusunW (talk) 13:56, 6 June 2017 (UTC)