- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 14:27, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
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Alfred Vökt
edit- ... that the tenor Alfred Vökt, who had a Ph.D. in law, performed at the opening of the Opernhaus Dortmund and in the premiere of Henze's Il re cervo? Source: several
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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 06:13, 30 May 2019 (UTC).
- I'm going to be frank here, the current hook has too much information. It requires knowledge of certain opera names and opera titles. And a hook about an opera actor playing a role is, to paraphrase another editor, a "so what?" hook. The part about him actually having a Ph.D in law is actually a lot more interesting and we should probably focus on that instead.
- ALT1
... that Swiss tenor Alfred Vökt had a Ph.D. in law?
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- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:33, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
- Sorry, I object. "Tenor" alone is way too vague. Who cares if he was Swiss, when his whole career was in Germany? It says a lot about a singer that he sares to tackle a new work, and that he is good enough to be chosen for the task. It's an opera with an interesting (3 versions) history, - that's what I want to display, not only the person and what he studied but never practised, as far as we know. Imagine it was about your father, please. Compromise:
- ALT2: ... that the tenor Alfred Vökt, who had a Ph.D. in law, performed in the premiere of Henze's Il re cervo? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:51, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
- Gerda, if you want to highlight that the opera has an interesting 3 versions history, they say that in the hook. Don't assume that non-musician readers are going to know or care about your allusion. Yoninah (talk) 14:21, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
- You misunderstood me, sorry. There was a complaint that the hook had too much information. The performance history of the opera has nothing to do with the singer, - I don't recall if he also sang in the performance of the third version. (If I find he didm that miht be worth mentioning. - Other than the German Wikipedia, we can have extra links in hooks, - so they can go to something worth knowing. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:26, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
this nomination still needs a DYK policy review. Flibirigit (talk) 13:58, 19 June 2019 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that the tenor Alfred Vökt, who performed in the premiere of Henze's Il re cervo, had a Ph.D. in law?
This article is new enough and long enough. I have rearranged Gerda's suggested hook into ALT3. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:52, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you, ALT3 is fine, but Alt1 is too poor, mentioning nothing of what he is known for, - striking. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:52, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
- Promoting, but the source says Dr. jur., which is a Doctor of Law, not a PhD. Yoninah (talk) 14:27, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you, ALT3 is fine, but Alt1 is too poor, mentioning nothing of what he is known for, - striking. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:52, 21 June 2019 (UTC)